Her

Her

Yesterday I saw her. Again.

Okay I may sound crazy but she is really something. There is something about her that really caught my attention. I mean she is ordinary but she is beautiful in her own way. She is different but she is...gorgeous! Yeah that's right! Gorgeous!

As she is walking at the park, everyone will turn to her as if there is magnetic field around her and she is the source. Everyone attention is on her. But she is just too naive to realize that. She is busy in her own world, walking around the park. I have watch her every now and then and she is not even realize that. But yesterday our eyes meet. She even touched my hand. I mean...accidentally touch my hand while she was walking.

I can feel the red life rush in my veins and my face steamed red. I feel like the clock stop ticking. My ears hear nothing and I saw nobody but her in the crowd. I long for her and I want her. I do not care what will my parents say and I do not care what my friends will say about her. I want her badly.

But what should I tell to my parents?? 

"Mom, dad, can I get a puppy?:


Here is one short story I wrote myself. What do you think? I love writing stories but sometimes I afraid to let people read it because I am afraid of critics and bad comments from readers. But I want to know what people think about my story. This is my first story I share publicly so enjoy and please leave a comment(say something nice) XP.